Trifextra 83 – Home By The Sea


Our dreams were of gold

Chasing clouds across the sky

Seeking rainbow’s end


This first ever attempt at a Haiku forms my entry into the Trifextra 83 writing challenge. Apologies to all lovers of Haiku for this intrusion into your world. I hope you can forgive me one day. 

25 thoughts on “Trifextra 83 – Home By The Sea

    1. paulmclem Post author

      Flattered by your comments Pirate! As I said this is my first attempt at anything like this. Very pleased that such an eminent Haiku student as yourself liked it. Chuffed!

    1. paulmclem Post author

      Wow! Bjorn AND Pirate both like my Haiku. Genuinely gobsmacked that such revered Poets saw something in my effort. Perhaps this is something I need to try more!

  1. shawnbrucepruett

    A haiku to remember…your dreams have definitely found the rainbow! Has this picture been photo shopped? If not, it is truly one of the most intriguing pictures I have ever seen. I too want to live there!

  2. trifectawriting

    Haha! I love your apology at the end, unnecessary though it may be. This is a great piece, Paul. And a lovely photo. Look at your range! You’re better than you thought you were! Thanks for linking up.


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