Trifextra 88 – Double Sacrifice

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We watched on,

Indifferent to her terror; apathetic to her cries.

From the loch it emerged –  

Trailing seaweed; dressed in algae.

A slimy claw ripped at her swollen belly.

We retreated,

Suddenly ashamed.

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These 33 words form my entry into the Trifextra 88 challenge. The photo prompt, which you can see on the Trifextra page, asked us to write about a creature coming out of the water. I hope you like my idea.

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This piece was my first winning effort in the Trifecta Writing Challenge. I have placed five times in all, but this was my debut appearance on the top step of the medal rostrum! As ever I am flattered that those judging saw something in my work. 

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27 thoughts on “Trifextra 88 – Double Sacrifice

  1. tempestletrope

    Agh! Made me do a reflexive protective cover of my abdominal scar.
    Good portrayal of the creepy cultists.

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    1. paulmclem Post author

      Thanks. Felt the picture really demanded a “creature from the black lagoon” type tale. The sacrifice of a young maiden “with child” was just the disturbed icing on my cake of weirdness. I do worry about the way my mind operates at times 🙂

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    1. paulmclem Post author

      Sometimes when I get round to posting a lot of the funny ideas have been used up. That and I hadn’t done many darker 33’s lately so one was due 🙂

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  2. Cobbie's World

    This reminds me of a story where the citizens of a village had to select one child to be given to a creature who lived in a lake. The creature kept the kids in bell jar on the bottom. Or, something twisted like that. Anyway, all hail your excellent, dark and twisted effort, Paul! Very well done. 🙂

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  3. Kir Piccini

    I’m beginning to think you don’t ever write anything mediocre and while I’m jealous, I sit in awe too.

    Stunning!

    Reply

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